0 Critique my poetry: the good and bad

Check out my writing,

Wanting to improve and grow, I hope to read your critiques of my writing. Lately, I feel as if I can't write- that my writing is substandard- that I have no talent or skill at all. Therefore, I hope to hear from all of my readers, informing me of what I am doing well and not so well.
Take care,

0 Quote and advice for teenagers

keep this in mind

All teenagers in society should learn one simple rule: Just because life shelters you, doesn't give you the right to behave like bullies