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Feb 2, 2011

2 Domination and Submission, poem

Enjoy this dark lyric

Temptations flowing in my blood
relations of a woman to love
sensations are never enough
to fulfill this hunger of my heart

and I desire to take apart, for her heart to behold in pieces of the dark
steal and rip and mold- like origami to layer, flip, and fold
between nightmare and daydream: a personality to build and erode

from innocence to erotic appraise
truth demented to forbidden lies
Oh how sweet this forbidden fruit subsides
adapting to my stimulating guise

and she looks at me with ambivalent, analytical eyes
caught between her world and mine, subtle and sublime
domination and submission of two minds

2 comments:

  1. Oooh, that gives me shivers. It has a strange sense of foreboding.

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  2. Thanks Patricia Lynne, love the feedback and seeing my words aren't wasted. I enjoyed writing this poem very much, had an interesting mood and flow to it.
    Take care,

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